Gabrial Heart-Sheild
Posts : 68 Join date : 2013-03-31 Age : 33
| Subject: Magnus Sortutarum Thu May 23, 2013 9:42 pm | |
| Magnus Sortitarum.[img] [/img] Gender: Male Species: Unicorn Mane: Silver Tail: Silver Eyes: Green Body: White, Tall, very slim Cutie Mark: Age (Baby,adult): Adult (27) Personality: Cold, Dark, manipulative, aspires to unlock all secrets of magic Likes: Magics, knowledge (Forbidden or otherwise, fine wine, and good company. Dislikes: Brutes, unpredictability, Weakness without proper cause. History: Magnus was born into a high and noble unicorn family, Magnus was so powerful that he was accepted into Celestia’s school without much more than a simple trick, (Or atleast to him it was a rather simple trick) He passed every test, and only hungered for more and more, knowledge was most important to him, and he quickly exceled without question, he was then forced to leave the Academy for actions that no pony was able to explain, why he left was a secret between him and Celestia, who was “disappointed” Magnus felt like he had been denied his right to further his need, He pushed his studies, and felt a freedom when he could finally study Anything and everything his heart desired, this is when he found books upon books of Black Magic, he found its dark allure too enticing, he needed more, but was quickly cast out of his family home by his 17th birthday, dishonoring his name, and that of his Family’s. 10 years would past from then, as Magnus would wonder the world, learning all form of magics, but most in the form of magic’s that many would claim would only harm others, Magnus wanted to avenge his name by showing others the power Magic could bring, that friendship was not true power, but magic was far more powerful. Those who would Magnus will always find him in his Sorcerer’s robes, his hood always hiding his eyes, and his cutie mark. Example RP segment: 5 Magnus watches the colt being cruel to a Filly, Magnus only cared because part of him was annoyed that this brute was harming a child, should he have been messing with another pony his size things would have been different, but this was a weakness he could net have… Magnus’ horn glow black, and before the colt could say another word, he was slammed into a wall, and then Magnus spoke with a clam demeanor,” you have committed a grievous sin in my eyes…” He walks around his eyes unblinking at this weak pathetic colt, floating in midair, “You picked a fight with one who cannot fight back with even proper chance, Now… Leave…” Magnus looks to the Filly and she ran not knowing what horrible fate awaited the colt, not caring… Acceptance | |
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Fireseeker
Posts : 1471 Join date : 2012-07-28 Location : United Kingdom
| Subject: Re: Magnus Sortutarum Fri May 24, 2013 3:30 am | |
| A little sketchy but nothing unacceptable overall. Take care not to make Magnus overpowered, or to interact with any canon characters, like Celestia.
Your character has been approved. | |
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Gabrial Heart-Sheild
Posts : 68 Join date : 2013-03-31 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: Magnus Sortutarum Fri May 24, 2013 10:47 am | |
| thank you, dont worry i have no intention of doing ether of those, hed want to avoid celestia like she has the plague XD | |
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