Burning Dunk (Burn)

Burning Dunk (Burn)



Gender: Male

Species: Pegasus

Mane:Spikey and firey orange with red tips.

Tail:Messy and orange with a red outline.

Eyes:You can se the burning of determination in his eyes. They are a firey redish orange.

Body:Orangeish brown it was bright orange but he plays to many sports and the dirt
stained his fur.

Cutie Mark:a flame/lightning bolt combination surounding a basket ball. Obtained when he joined a basketball team in high school and shatered the glass backboard during a dunk.

Age (Baby,adult):Young adult

Personality: Burn can be a little bit arogant sometimes and even lets his abilities go to his head this can lead him into big trouble.while generaly a happy guy his competitive side can get the best of him. To rivals he can seem quite cold and distant but he actualy holds no grudge.

Likes:Basketball (and sports in general), Spagettie, and Horror movies.

Dislikes: Criminals, Relaxing, and Romance.

History: Burn has always loved to live life on the edge. From the time he could fly he trained to increase his speed and now flies at a high speed for his age. When Faced with danger he always keeps calm and is usually the first to charge into battle. His dream it to one day join a major sporting event and claim victory. When he was little he lived in cloudsdale later realizing there was more of the world to explore he moved to Manehattan and tried out for a team. Carelessly breaking a his left hind hoove trying to pass the biggest pony there. Deciding he didn't make the team he departed for ponyville as soon as he could.

Example RP segment:Problem: A colt is bullying a filly in the Manehattan street. When your OC looks to him, he turns to your OC and snaps, "What're you looking at?" Given your OC’s personality, compose a brief narrative in which your OC identifies and addresses the situation.

Solution: Burn hears a young cry for help. Imidietly assesing the situation he flies over nearby. A colt appears to be pushing a young filly around. "What're you looking at?" The colt snaps noticing his presence. "Oh don't mind me..." Burn replies slowly floating to a nearby roof. With the filly still begging for some one to help Burn waits for the colt to turn his back. With a flap of his wings Burn dashes at the colt not pausing to think of any position changes the colt could make. Shocked when the colt hears his wing beat and sidesteps Burn crashes into the filly. Imidiatly on his feet Burn turns to confront the now running colt. He decides to let the colt go and turns to check on the filly. Upon finding her front right side hoove broken he escorts her to the hospital apologizing and cursing himself under his breath.

"Acceptance"

well the imige is kinda up?

iM expiriancing problems with that.

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Try to expand on your OC's history section. Perhaps talk about Burn when he was younger and at school, or what he does now for a living.

Other than that, be a bit more careful with your spelling.

Yeah sory when i wrote this i was half asleep. lol

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