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Rez

Rez


Posts : 277
Join date : 2012-04-13
Age : 30
Location : Ponyville

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PostSubject: Tantei Faito (Detective Fight)   Tantei Faito (Detective Fight) I_icon_minitimeFri May 31, 2013 7:55 pm

Tantei Faito (Detective Fight)

Tantei Faito (Detective Fight) Friend_soldier_s_fourth_oc_by_viperswan-d677qk3

Gender: Stallion.

Species: Unicorn

Mane: Black with a red stripe. Short

Tail: short and black

Eyes: dark orange.

Body: dark silver.

Cutie Mark: Swords

Age: Adult. 22

Personality: He is kind but needs to work on being gentle. He helps others as long as it doesn't interfere with a case. He always keeps his sword on him. He is quiet while working but loves to talk to his friends during his free time. He has a habit of not paying attention to others around him when concentrated on something.

Likes: He likes his job, friends, music, closing his cases, finding the truth,
having some free time, partys.

Dislikes: Crime, Alcohol, Bad coworkers, not finishing a case.
He is Taken

History: Tantei was an orphan from birth untill he was adopted by a Neighponese couple. They taught him how to speak both Neighponese and Equestrian. He was also taught in the way of the blade. They also home schooled him in magic. He would some days go with his father to work on a case as a detective.
He was smart when it came to finding out who did it. One time though while he waited for his dad to take the criminal in the criminal took him as a hostage. He took the knowlege of his balde skill to stab the criminals hoof and use the chain on the handle to trip him and hold him down with his blade pointed at him. That's when he got his cutie mark. After his father gave a request to let him in to be a detective hearing that tan was applying for a job. After some time of looking through his records he was accepted in. Right now he lives in ponyville as a detective and visits his mother every now and then.

Example RP Segment: #4

Tantei was walking down the street while it was pouring. He sees a light and sees its coming from the tavern and heads in. There is a lot of ponies sitting around smiling and laughing. He didn't really care he was happy too for solving a case. "Can I get a cider please?" He asked the bartender sitting down and putting a few bits on the bar. The bartender slides him a glass of cider. "Thank you." He said smiling and taking a drink.

[Accepted]


Last edited by Friend Soldier on Fri Jun 21, 2013 3:31 pm; edited 2 times in total
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Callilian

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Join date : 2013-02-27
Location : Lost to the sands of time.

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PostSubject: Re: Tantei Faito (Detective Fight)   Tantei Faito (Detective Fight) I_icon_minitimeFri May 31, 2013 9:08 pm

Hey. Hey, Friend. Check the bottom for the magic word ^^
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Fireseeker

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Join date : 2012-07-28
Location : United Kingdom

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PostSubject: Re: Tantei Faito (Detective Fight)   Tantei Faito (Detective Fight) I_icon_minitimeFri May 31, 2013 9:39 pm

Inclusion of the aforementioned magic word is required.

You will also need to include either more detailed physical descriptions of Tantei or a picture of him.
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Rez

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Join date : 2012-04-13
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Location : Ponyville

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PostSubject: Re: Tantei Faito (Detective Fight)   Tantei Faito (Detective Fight) I_icon_minitimeFri May 31, 2013 9:45 pm

Imgoing to have a pic sent to a mod/admin to ad it to the app.
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PostSubject: Re: Tantei Faito (Detective Fight)   Tantei Faito (Detective Fight) I_icon_minitimeFri May 31, 2013 9:57 pm

Changes made.

Your character has been approved.
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