G-mini
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Join date : 2013-06-23
 |  Subject: JOJO the shining star  Sun Jun 23, 2013 12:48 pm | |
| JOJO the shining starGender:MareSpecies:PegasusMane: PinkTail:PinkEyes:sapphire blueBody:light yellowCutie Mark:a music note and a paint brushAge (Baby,adult):Teen (16)Personality:sometimes shy,weird,Loyal to her friends,scary,coolLikes:Dancing,Singing,Food,Drawing,Painting,Rapping
Dislikes:Rich people who are arrogantHistory:When JOJO was young she wanted to become a singer,but her father and mother didn't like that.They said it was stupid and a waist of time.JOJO was sad that her family didn't support her....When JOJO turned 16 she went to her favorite company for an audition.They liked her voice and they wanted her in their company.JOJO was really happy but her family didn't know that she did that and they got really mad.JOJO moved with her best friend Aurora.They had the same dream and they became stars together.
JOJO was walking down the streets of cloudsdale and then.. BAM!! A
colt bumped into her and said:"Oh JOJO! im sorry.."
"It's ok!" says JOJO. "i wanted to tell you that...i.. love you!"JOJO smiled "i love you too! just i never told you did i?" "Yep" says the colt "Want to come over?" "sure" says JOJO.
Acceptance
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Blind Side
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Join date : 2012-11-29
Age : 32
Location : Canterlot
| | Subject: Re: JOJO the shining star Sun Jun 23, 2013 1:41 pm | |
| Hello. Welcome to the Forum! I noticed you're missing a few things on your app. I'm pretty sure you've seen the template, but I'll post the link to it just in case: https://mlp-fim-oc-rp.rpg-board.net/t2-pony-creation-templateAdd the necessary things and let me know, I'll take a second look. :) If you have any questions, feel free to join us in the chatbox at the bottom of the main page. | |
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G-mini
Posts : 2
Join date : 2013-06-23
| | Subject: Re: JOJO the shining star Sun Jun 23, 2013 3:35 pm | |
| Ok You can take a second look now | |
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Blind Side
Posts : 870
Join date : 2012-11-29
Age : 32
Location : Canterlot
| | Subject: Re: JOJO the shining star Sun Jun 23, 2013 5:23 pm | |
| much better. just keep an eye on the spelling and grammar. none-the-less, it is approvable.
Approved.
Have fun :) | |
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