MintGreen

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size=29]Mint Green[/size]

Image:
http://mintytheartist.deviantart.com/art/ANOTHER-PONY-WAT-419493162?q=gallery%

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Gender: Female
Species:Pegasus
Mane:Aqua and white
Tail:Aqua and white
Eyes:Pink
Body:Light blue
Cutie Mark:laptop (Talent is programming)
Age (Baby,adult): Adult
Personality:Shy at first, but loud once you get to know her
Likes:Art, photography, video games, anime
Dislikes:Fish, spiders, sushi

Example RP segment:

1. A foal has lost its mother and is sobbing inconsolably in the street . Given your OC’s personality,

compose a brief narrative in which your OC identifies and addresses the situation.

MintGreen was taking a stroll in Ponyville. It was afternoon, and she thought she should head

home. As she turned her head, she caught a glimpse of a small foal crying on the street. She

studied the foal from afar, and slowly approached it.
"What's wrong?" She asked in a soothing voice. The foal kept crying, but after a while, it started

mumbling 'mummy'. MintGreen knew right away that the foal was missing it's mother. She lifted the

foal onto her back.
"Where's your mummy?" She asked the youngling.
"At the shops.." The foal replied.
MintGreen travelled to the local shops and announced that she had found the foal on the loudspeaker. After a while, devastated mother was reunited with it's child.

[Acceptance]

Thanks for reading

Posts : 1450 Join date : 2012-11-06

This is a good start but you need a whole lot more detail! Try looking at someone else's finished App.
https://mlp-fim-oc-rp.rpg-board.net/t1885-nikki-hooves
(Note, it doesn't need to be this long but a few paragraphs would be advised in each section minus appearance and likes and dislikes which need at least 5-10 likes and dislikes.) Plus with Pony technology in the show it doesn't state the use of computers or much technology at all. So, she can't be a laptop programmer.

Posts : 5 Join date : 2013-12-18

Changed some things...Good?

MintGreen

Image:
http://mintytheartist.deviantart.com/art/ANOTHER-PONY-WAT-419493162?q=gallery%

3AMintyTheArtist%2F46845638&qo=13

(ignore the cutie mark in the picture above)

Gender: Female

Species:Pegasus

Mane:Aqua with white stripes

Tail:Aqua with white stripes

Eyes:Dark pink

Body:Light blue, a bit skinnier than normal ponies

Cutie Mark:Pencil and eraser(Talent is Art,drawing)

Age (Baby,adult): Adult

Personality:
Shy at first, but loud once you get to know her. She is kind and thoughtful, has very creative ideas. She's very sensitive and can cry as well as get angry easily. If she gets yelled at she cries. MintGreen doesn't have high self esteem and believes that others are better than her. MintGreen dislikes other ponies that copy her, she supports originality. She's also a bit of a procrastinator. MintGreen is very loyal to her friends, she prefers to chat with them rather than her family. She eats healthy foods and loves spending her time creating things and sometimes she sells them at the market.She loves her life and her friends.

Likes:Art, photography, video games, anime, knitting, singing

Dislikes:Fish, spiders, sushi, dentists, rollercoasters, heat, loud noises

History:

MintGreen was born in Cloudsdale.
When MintGreen was a little filly, her mother died and she had to live with her father. She had no siblings and envied others who had some. Her family was poor without her mother doing work for the family, and her father lost most of his money . She was currently enrolled in an art school, she was about to leave because of financial problems.

MintGreen wanted to stay at that school but thought she was no good at art because she found it difficult to draw without magic, most of the artists were unicorns.

She discovered her cutie mark when she entered her artwork in a competition and won a huge amount of money, which helped her family a lot. Eventually, she got her own house in Ponyville and currently lives alone, creating artwork and selling it.

Example RP segment:

1. A foal has lost its mother and is sobbing inconsolably in the street . Given your OC’s personality,

compose a brief narrative in which your OC identifies and addresses the situation.

MintGreen was taking a stroll in Ponyville. It was afternoon, and she thought she should head home. As she turned her head, she caught a glimpse of a small foal crying on the street. She studied the foal from afar, and slowly approached it.
"What's wrong?" She asked in a soothing voice. The foal kept crying, but after a while, it started mumbling 'mummy'. MintGreen knew right away that the foal was missing it's mother. She lifted the foal onto her back.
"Where's your mummy?" She asked the youngling.
"At the shops.." The foal replied.
MintGreen traveled to the local shops and announced that she had found the foal on the loudspeaker. After a while, devastated mother was reunited with it's child.

[Acceptance]

Subject: Re: MintGreen Wed Dec 18, 2013 4:17 am

There is an edit button too ^-^

Posts : 5 Join date : 2013-12-18

Cerys wrote:: There is an edit button too ^-^

Lol thx didn't see it there XD

Posts : 1450 Join date : 2012-11-06

This is getting there but, there are also some spelling errors that needs fixing. And you put Rp segment where history is supposed to go and visa versa. Hehe! Also do a quick grammar sweep.

Posts : 5 Join date : 2013-12-18

Doodle Bug wrote:: This is getting there but, there are also some spelling errors that needs fixing. And you put Rp segment where history is supposed to go and visa versa. Hehe! Also do a quick grammar sweep.

Fixed it, Is this better?

Posts : 1450 Join date : 2012-11-06

"Can also cry easily too. Very sensitive." Can you craft this into a full sentence please since can is usually not the beginning of a sentence unless it is someone's name. And I still feel like there isn't enough details in the personality to fully describe her. And also please describe how she got her cutiemark.