Minty Swirls

MINTY SWIRLS
Gender: Mare/female
Species: Pegusus
Mane: long, color: black and teal (Fluttershy's mane style)
Tail: long, color: black and teal (Fluttershy's tail style)
Eyes: Baby Blue
Body: Normal mare pegusus body
Cutie Mark: two hearts, one all black and one all teal. How she got it: As a filly, Minty loved to make milkshakes, her favorite kind to make was and still is mint milkshakes. The first time she made a mint milkshake she gave one to her mom and dad. They both thought it was amazing and asked her how she did it, she answered simply "They were made with the love from my heart." And her cutie mark appeared.
Age (Baby,adult): 18, adult
Personality: Shy but opens up to friends, she is also an egghead and gets hyper sometimes from to much sweets
Likes: Mint milkshakes, books, singing, sweets, sleeping, rain (when inside)
Dislikes: fire, lighting, dancing, hurting others feelings, being hyper
History: Minty grew up in Cloudsdale in a normal house with no sibling but both parents who were very protective of her, she didnt go to school because of this and was homeschooled, she didnt go outside her house much and this helped her to gain her shy personality, she had and has,no friends because she didnt go to school and has yet to learn the true magic of friendship but hopes to find some friends in her new home in Ponyville

Example RP segment: Minty stood in the pouring rain shivering. She stood between two streets. She glance to the one on her right. It was a tavern. She could see the fire in tye fireplace from the windows but the tavern was filled with drunken ponies she had never met. She looked towards the other street and at the far end of it was her house. Minty thought to herself outloud as she normally did when nopony else was around. "Well the tavern is just a few skips away and it looks so cozy and warm in there! But mom did say never to go into a tavern. But my house is so far away!" She looked back down towards the street where her house was.
"It doesnt matter!" She yelled to herself.
"Im not going to let mom down! Im going to my home and thats final!" She said and started galloping on the street where her home was at the end. She knew she would be exghausted by the time she got there, but she knew it was worth it.

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