Ivory
Posts : 2 Join date : 2012-02-11 Age : 29 Location : Sleeping
| Subject: Rai Sat Feb 11, 2012 2:52 am | |
| RaiGender: Female. Species: Pegasus. Mane: Golden yellow. Tail: Golden yellow. (Same as mane.) Eyes: Light blue. Body: Dark grey almost black. It is also skinny with a bit of muscles. Cutie Mark: Lightening. Same color as eyes. (Also shown in reference.) Age (Baby,adult): Young adult / teenager. Personality: Rai tries to stay modest, but like everypony she has her moments. She is very happy, energetic, loves to be outside, & having fun. She is good at hiding her emotions, but when she is alone she spends time thinking about the world around her & her feelings. She always tries her best not to let others get to her & her insecure feelings, as well, just as anypony. She loves being right & tries her hardest to not pick fights over little things, especially when she knows she is. She'll accept almost any challenges, as long as it doesn't hurt her friends or her loved ones. She gets angry some what easily, it depends on the matter. She also has trouble staying mad at people, unless the situation is horrible. She will stand up for friends & will stay loyal to them, no matter what. She loves blizzards, storms, animals, sleeping, & her friends & family. She hates being told what to do, obsessively & getting up early. History: Rai was born & raise in the cities of Cloudsdale. She lived an average marehood. She was raised with just a mother. Her mom never told her why her father left her, directly. Whenever her mom spoke of him, it was usually profanity. Rai was very eager to move out & when she was able to live on her own, she took advantage of it. She moved to Ponyville for a change of scene. (I'll add more if I have to. I have a bad writer's block. ;u; )
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dontpressenter Admin
Posts : 1594 Join date : 2011-11-21 Location : A little pocket universe after almost destroying the old one.
| Subject: Re: Rai Sat Feb 11, 2012 3:03 am | |
| Well, so far it's cool, but do you mind adding a history? It doesn't have to be the next war and peace, just an outline of where your pony comes from how she grew up, etc.
Oh, and I highly recommend joining the chatbox at the bottom of the main page. | |
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Ivory
Posts : 2 Join date : 2012-02-11 Age : 29 Location : Sleeping
| Subject: Re: Rai Sat Feb 11, 2012 8:55 pm | |
| Updated. ^^
EDIT: I also fixed some grammar mistakes. Hope you don't mind. ouo | |
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dontpressenter Admin
Posts : 1594 Join date : 2011-11-21 Location : A little pocket universe after almost destroying the old one.
| Subject: Re: Rai Sun Feb 12, 2012 7:41 pm | |
| Okay, then that's good for a start. You can flesh out details in RP. Welcome to the forum. | |
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