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Jenny!
Posts : 127 Join date : 2012-08-05 Age : 29 Location : The Rainy Place
| Subject: The Fatal Condition Mon Jun 29, 2015 12:52 am | |
| Aurora is driving down the road. It's dark and she can't see. A car without it's headlights is speeding up the road. Aurora swerves off the road, does a double somersault in the air, and smashes in the median.
Aurora wakes up to the distant sound of beeping. At first she thinks it is her alarm, and that had all been a dream. But no, it was very real. She pitifully looks over to see the heart monitor and lets a tear run down her face. "Miss, your doctor is here to see you." says her nurse, walking into the room.
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Delix
Posts : 1756 Join date : 2015-05-21 Age : 25 Location : Spaaaaaace
| Subject: Re: The Fatal Condition Mon Jun 29, 2015 7:11 pm | |
| Saron stepped inside the room looking at his clipboard "Well well, look who finally woke up... Good morning miss Aurora.. You were in coma for about three days!" he sayed "You hit your head quite hard there.. do you.. remember anything that happened?" | |
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Jenny!
Posts : 127 Join date : 2012-08-05 Age : 29 Location : The Rainy Place
| Subject: Re: The Fatal Condition Mon Jun 29, 2015 11:21 pm | |
| "I- I remember s-swerving of the road.... I don't think- I- Why am I here? Where is my son?
Icy Spring wakes up in the Pediatric Ward of the hospital, a day later. "M-Mom? MOM?? " Icy says, getting upset. " Hi there!" says a younger nurse. "Your mommy is just fine. Don't worry!" | |
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Eevee
Posts : 424 Join date : 2015-05-16 Age : 23 Location : 133t-sp34k w0r1d, m0th3r-buck3r.
| Subject: Re: The Fatal Condition Mon Jun 29, 2015 11:29 pm | |
| Flutter Shot paced outside the room where her mare-friend was very hurt. Her sister had tried to help calm the tan mare down, but no effect. Flutter thought it was her fault. "If only I were there..." she repeated for what must have been the twentieth time.
"Miss Shot?" the nurse called to her.
"Yes, ma'am?" she replied.
"Your friend is doing much better. She's out of her coma.The doctor is with her, but I'm sure he wouldn't mind letting you be near Miss Aurora."
"Thank you, ma'am." she tried to calmly walk to the room. | |
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Delix
Posts : 1756 Join date : 2015-05-21 Age : 25 Location : Spaaaaaace
| Subject: Re: The Fatal Condition Mon Jun 29, 2015 11:44 pm | |
| "Dont worry, your son will be fine. You just need a little time and rest now" He turned around as Flutter Shot entered the room "Oh, hello miss Shot, Im doctor Saron. Miss Aurora is awake and able to speak to you now." | |
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Jenny!
Posts : 127 Join date : 2012-08-05 Age : 29 Location : The Rainy Place
| Subject: Re: The Fatal Condition Tue Jun 30, 2015 12:08 am | |
| Aurora, weary-eyed, nods to the doctor. "As long as... my son is OK." she says. She looks over to find the familiar face of Her mare-friend.
Icy, doing much better than his mother, looks over at the other foals and fillies. He smiles at a filly in a full body cast who is talking to a nurse. | |
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Eevee
Posts : 424 Join date : 2015-05-16 Age : 23 Location : 133t-sp34k w0r1d, m0th3r-buck3r.
| Subject: Re: The Fatal Condition Tue Jun 30, 2015 12:47 pm | |
| Flutter trotted to the bed side much faster than she had liked. But this was her mare-friend. "Flippin' Celestia, Aurora, if only I had gone with you, this wouldn't have happened." | |
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Delix
Posts : 1756 Join date : 2015-05-21 Age : 25 Location : Spaaaaaace
| Subject: Re: The Fatal Condition Tue Jun 30, 2015 1:01 pm | |
| She really had luck.. A broken hoof, a concussion and a few bruises.. It could be worse!" He sayed reading through the pages on his clipboard | |
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Jenny!
Posts : 127 Join date : 2012-08-05 Age : 29 Location : The Rainy Place
| Subject: Re: The Fatal Condition Thu Jul 02, 2015 12:34 am | |
| "I called you!" (Entering Flashback Mode)
Aurora: Hey! I'm running to the store, need anything? Flutter: No, I'm good. Aurora:You sure? I can grab you whatever. Flutter: Nah. Aurora: Ok, well, I'm heading down route 47 so if you- SCREEEEEEECH | |
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Eevee
Posts : 424 Join date : 2015-05-16 Age : 23 Location : 133t-sp34k w0r1d, m0th3r-buck3r.
| Subject: Re: The Fatal Condition Thu Jul 02, 2015 9:15 am | |
| "Thus further proving it's my fault!" she teared up, | |
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Jenny!
Posts : 127 Join date : 2012-08-05 Age : 29 Location : The Rainy Place
| Subject: Re: The Fatal Condition Fri Jul 03, 2015 2:22 pm | |
| "No... It was my fault... I wasn't watching the road...you were on speaker." Aurora says sheepishly. "I was looking at something on my phone... a beautiful dress...for your-" Aurora falls backward. Her heart monitor starts beeping faster. | |
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Delix
Posts : 1756 Join date : 2015-05-21 Age : 25 Location : Spaaaaaace
| Subject: Re: The Fatal Condition Fri Jul 03, 2015 2:46 pm | |
| "She is getting weak again!" The nurse said "Quick! get a syringe!" the doctor said. The adrenaline shot wake Aurora up "Careful! We still dont know if you have any serious issues.. Its better you dont think about anything that could get you worried. Just rest a little for now" He said in relief | |
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Eevee
Posts : 424 Join date : 2015-05-16 Age : 23 Location : 133t-sp34k w0r1d, m0th3r-buck3r.
| Subject: Re: The Fatal Condition Fri Jul 10, 2015 7:47 pm | |
| Flutter choked back tears, her grass green eyes staring into Aurora's light icy blue. "It is my fault." | |
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Jenny!
Posts : 127 Join date : 2012-08-05 Age : 29 Location : The Rainy Place
| Subject: Re: The Fatal Condition Mon Jul 13, 2015 4:32 pm | |
| Aurora weakly looks up at Flutter. "I'm so sorry..." Her heart monitor starts to slow down. " I... love...y-" Aurora's hand goes limb and her monitor goes BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP | |
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Eevee
Posts : 424 Join date : 2015-05-16 Age : 23 Location : 133t-sp34k w0r1d, m0th3r-buck3r.
| Subject: Re: The Fatal Condition Mon Jul 13, 2015 4:37 pm | |
| "Aurora...?" she gasped. "Aurora... Aurora?! NO, AURORA!" | |
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