Pinkielover123
Posts : 3
Join date : 2012-06-27
Age : 29
Location : Athens,GA (Used to live in england.)
 |  Subject: Lightshine.  Wed Jun 27, 2012 2:18 pm | |
| Name: Lightshine. Image: http://pinkielover123.deviantart.com/gallery/37342993#/d4usjcq ( Sorry if the link isnt working.) Gender: Mare. Species: Pegasai. Mane: Blue. Tail: Light yellow. Eyes: Dashie's eye color. Body: Light blue. Cutie Mark: Rainbow ice cream cone with vanila ice cream,With an sun icon (Sorry,I cant remake the cutie mark.) Age (Baby,adult): Adult. Personality: Doesnt want to be bothered much,Likes to make sweets,Clear the sky. Likes: Sweets,Lightmoon,Racing,Her siblings,To pretect her little sister. Dislikes: Being bullied,Losing,Be bothered from a nap,Getting rained on,Being mad at,Getting mad. History: When lightshine was young,She kept wishing for her cutie mark to come. One day,She got her cutie mark by a cooking contest. She had more and many friends,One day,Her dad died because of a maticore. Lightshine kept going to the everfree forest. One day,Her mom forbidded (Sorry for my spelling,Im british.) her from going there. She grew stronger everyday,She forgot about her dad's death. That's all i have.
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1ncnspcuous
Procedures Administrator
Posts : 387
Join date : 2012-01-27
| | Subject: Re: Lightshine. Wed Jun 27, 2012 3:49 pm | |
| Hello Pinkie. Welcome to the forum.
You will have to think of a history for her. Please do so.
Thank you. | |
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Pinkielover123
Posts : 3
Join date : 2012-06-27
Age : 29
Location : Athens,GA (Used to live in england.)
| | Subject: Re: Lightshine. Thu Jun 28, 2012 12:03 pm | |
| Wait! Figured it out!
When lightshine was young,She kept wishing for her cutie mark to come.
One day,She got her cutie mark by a cooking contest.
She had more and many friends,One day,Her dad died because of a maticore.
Lightshine kept going to the everfree forest.
One day,Her mom forbidded (Sorry for my spelling,Im british.) her from going there.
She grew stronger everyday,She forgot about her dad's death.
That's all i have. | |
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1ncnspcuous
Procedures Administrator
Posts : 387
Join date : 2012-01-27
| | Subject: Re: Lightshine. Thu Jun 28, 2012 12:29 pm | |
| I'm sorry, but a lot of things need to be refined and/or expanded upon.
What does "Clear the sky" mean with regards to her personality?
Her history needs to be detailed as well as cohesive. For example, describe the cooking contest. What is the significance of the Everfree forest?
Please consider this. | |
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Pinkielover123
Posts : 3
Join date : 2012-06-27
Age : 29
Location : Athens,GA (Used to live in england.)
| | Subject: Re: Lightshine. Thu Jun 28, 2012 12:39 pm | |
| Clear the sky as in " When there is gonna be a storm.She likes to help them."
Lightshine goes in there to find her dad,Because she doesnt believe.
The cooking contest was suppose to be to make sweets,Lightshine won because she made the tasteist one.
Sorry. | |
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MintGreen
Posts : 5
Join date : 2013-12-18
| | Subject: Hello Wed Dec 18, 2013 2:05 am | |
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Doodle Bug
Posts : 1450
Join date : 2012-11-06
| | Subject: Re: Lightshine. Wed Dec 18, 2013 2:09 am | |
| I'm sorry Mint, but you can't post your app on an already existing one. Also, WELCOME TO THE FORUM :D! We hope you'll enjoy your time here and please be sure to check out our rules then post an app in the submitted creation forum! | |
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