Green Storm (Or Stripes)

Green Storm
Nickname: Stripes

Gender: Stallion
Species: Pegasus
Mane: Short, with a Lime green stripe
Tail: Same as mane
Eyes: Lime green
Body: Grey, with Green hooves
Cutie Mark: A green eagle with spreaded wings
Age (Baby,adult): Adult, (27)
Personality: Stripes is a kind and somewhat energetic stallion who loves to fly. He's a pretty fast flyer and likes to be outside. He likes to make new friends and has lots of care for other ponies. He loves races and can never resist a challenge. He also loves nature and to walk around in forests or flying above the clouds because of the fresh air. He studies pegasi and their wings, to discover more ways of effective, fast flying. Stripes hates bullies and rude ponies, but he likes if other ponies are nice and honest

Likes: Other ponies, flying, adventures, races, making friends, being outside
Dislikes: being sad, bullies, being lame, loud noises, parties, being rude, shining things

History: Stripes was born in Cloudsdale as a pretty normal colt.. he was the only child in his family. His dad did races in Cloudsdale.. and Stripes always looked up to him and wanted to be like his dad one day. When he got older, his dad taught him how to fly. At first he had a few problems staying in the air and fell down a few times, luckily his dad catched him and told him not to give up and keep trying, so he practised and practised.. and became a very good flyer and he was very fast too, his dad was very proud of him. He wanted to be a racer like his dad so he trained with him and later he was finally able to make a race against his dad. To his Dad's surprise, Stripes won, and got his cutie mark. This was the best day in his life. When he got older, he started to study pegasi and their wing power. And he discovered multiple ways of using objects to pick up speed. His parents were really proud of him. Later he moved down to
Ponyville to get some ground under his hooves.

Example RP segment: (Foal has lost its mother)
Sripes was heading down to the marketplace when he saw a foal crying on the street. "Hey, Is everything ok?" he asked "I-I lost my mommy" the foal said
"Aww, dont worry.. hop on, we'll find her" He said and the foal hopped onto his back, they went down the marketplace to search for his mommy and found her after a while "Hey, is this your mommy?" he asked pointing at a mare "Yes! Thank you!" the foal said running towards her

[Acceptance]

Watch your spelling and grammar, there's quite a few errors throughout which need changing (capitals, punctuation, wrong words used, etc)

Ok, I corrected everything I saw.. though I have a feeling I missed a few mistakes

Still some grammatical errors in the RP section, but passable.

Your character has been approved.