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Ridge Cut

Ridge Cut


Posts : 24
Join date : 2017-01-27
Age : 23
Location : Plymouth

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PostSubject: Ridge Cut. His Biography   Ridge Cut. His Biography I_icon_minitimeFri Jan 27, 2017 7:16 pm

Name: Ridge Cut

Gender: Male (Stallion)

Species: Unicorn

Mane: Blue with a stripe of red in the middle

Tail: Stump like. Also blue with a stripe of red in the center.

Eyes: Lapis Blue

Body: His body is like any regular

Cutie Mark: A Gemstone (A Sardonyx). It is unkown what the Gemstone even is there for.

Age (Baby, adult): Adult (21 in human years).

Personality:  Ridge Cut is, firstly, a playful and charming person. He is often described as Dashing and seductive when speaking in a fight. When he wins a game or anything at all, he can be quite egotistical and boastful. This would be alright if he didn’t emit an aura of selfishness when doing so. In a fight, his mood changes to a more serious inside-self. This may not be shown at first due to his maintained outer structure and physical body language, however when he become annoyed he will present that serious mood and will maintain it for a few days after the initial fight.

Likes: Interesting geological locations, Attention, Music (Preferably video game music), Video Games.

Dislikes: Public Humiliation, being told he isn’t correct, Criticism, losing.
Fears: Public Humiliation, Rejection, Being Ignored.

History:
Raised in a Gemstone cutting-based family with his mother and father working full time, Ridge cut has always been self-sufficient. He managed to get into school but was kicked out after his attendance shot an all-time low of 5%. He spent the teenage years starting to write and explore the famous landmarks of equestria. He also started getting into magic. Something he had not previously learned before except in school. Now that he is of age to move out... He is going to leave behind his family and start anew.

Example RP segment: A colt is bullying a filly in the Manehattan street. When your OC looks to him, he turns to your OC and snaps, "What're you looking at?" Given your OC’s personality, compose a brief narrative in which your OC identifies and addresses the situation.

He gave the stallion a cruel, empty, and cold look as he spoke.

“You sir are nothing more than a sad stallion who feels bigger when they bully little foals. You are the exact cause of disharmony as we know it. GROW UP and stop bullying the foal”

The stallion looked surprised. He then gave Ridge a fierce stare.

“What’re YOU going to do about it then? You’re probably a CLOD who doesn’t take their history lesson’s you moron!”. The stallion then dug into the ground getting ready to charge.

“That’s funny coming from someone who needs to resort to physical action rather than using the power of his weak words” He sneered coldly.

“I’VE HEARD ENOUGH!” The stallion said as he charged at Ridge cut with all his might.

Ridge swiftly moved his way to the side, making the stallion bump into the lamppost behind him. “Nice try. Next time don’t bully helpless foals...

“My... Head... Ow... That’s... Just..” With that, the stallion fainted due to the impact.

Ridge walked over to the foal, looking a little blunt but happy. “If any stallions do that to you again, just do what I did. Okay?”
The foal nodded and quickly fled away from the scene.

[Not the BEST i've done but still...]

[Acceptance?]


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Fireseeker

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Location : United Kingdom

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PostSubject: Re: Ridge Cut. His Biography   Ridge Cut. His Biography I_icon_minitimeFri Jan 27, 2017 7:32 pm

Hi Ridge Cut, welcome to the site.

Like your app. Looks good.

There's just one little word missing. Skim over the Character Creation Procedures part in the Rules and you'll see what I mean.

After that, everyone looks good for approval.
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Ridge Cut

Ridge Cut


Posts : 24
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Age : 23
Location : Plymouth

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PostSubject: Re: Ridge Cut. His Biography   Ridge Cut. His Biography I_icon_minitimeSat Jan 28, 2017 8:15 am

I added that word... I think?
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Delix


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Join date : 2015-05-21
Age : 25
Location : Spaaaaaace

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PostSubject: Re: Ridge Cut. His Biography   Ridge Cut. His Biography I_icon_minitimeSat Jan 28, 2017 3:42 pm

Looks great! Maybe add a few more details to the History of your character ^^

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