My oc

Apple Shimmers

Gender:mare

Species: unicorn

Mane: dark brown

Tail: dark brown

Eyes: normal brown

Body:white

Cutie Mark:a heart shaped apple

Age (Baby,adult):adult

Personality: shy, protective, tries to be funny and can be depressed at times

Likes: zap apples, animals, swimming and reading

Dislikes: ponies who make fun of her friends

I'm sorry but you'll need more info than that as well as the magical word at the bottom found in the rules! :D

Please make sure to read our rules: https://mlp-fim-oc-rp.rpg-board.net/t1169-the-rules
https://mlp-fim-oc-rp.rpg-board.net/t2-pony-creation-template <- And here to get your app information!

Cutie Mark:
Age (Baby,adult):
Personality:
Likes:
Dislikes:
History:

Example RP segment: (Refer to post below)

[Place the correct specified word indicating that you have read the rules here]

The rp segment can also be found in the second post of this topic: https://mlp-fim-oc-rp.rpg-board.net/t2-pony-creation-template

What does RP segment mean?

It means you need to pick from our selection of example topics letting us see how your character acts! It is like a mini rp using only your character's actions and words! ^^
Below I will post examples of approved apps that might help: https://mlp-fim-oc-rp.rpg-board.net/t3023-sleepy-stitches
https://mlp-fim-oc-rp.rpg-board.net/t3238-slyph-gongjiang

Oh dear I can't do that I don't type a lot when I'm RPing...

I see that Doodle's already got the application part covered, but if you need RP help I can do that :)

I really appreciate that thanks ^_^

Here, I can PM you and we can get started there. :3

Alrighty

Apple Shimmers wrote:

Oh dear I can't do that I don't type a lot when I'm RPing...

Well, you can just post what you can and we can work from there ^^

Ok but it might be a few days I have to make some adjustments to Apple's personality and stuff

Understood! Take your time!

Alright

Pm one of us when you are ready and we'll look over it from there :D

okeydokey

I can't wait to see this finished :D

Neither can I lol

Sample Rp:
"As Apple walked down a path in town, she began to hear faint crying. At first, she thought the crying was only in her head. She continued walking but the farther she walked, the louder the cry got. As Apple realized it wasn't in her head, she started following the sound. She walked down a dark, cold alley and found a tiny foal with dark brown fur, black hair, and yellow eyes wrapped in a yellow blanket. She'd also noticed that the blanket in the basket had the name "Night Shadow" sewn onto it. Apple picked up the tiny foal and softly whispered, "It's ok! It's ok! You're safe now!" Calming the colt down enough to where he slowly stopped crying. Apple carried him back to her house and said, "You poor thing, who would leave such a cute little colt?" Apple carefully gave him a bath and wrapped him a clean red baby blanket "There we go all clean!" Night Shadow giggles as Apple nuzzles him "Aww, don't worry Night Shadow, I'll be the best mother I can!" she told him even though he didn't know what she was saying.

Acceptance

Good but you still need more added onto the personality as well as a History. Even if not much is known, She does have a history weather other characters know that or not ^^ At least this long: https://mlp-fim-oc-rp.rpg-board.net/t3472-tiger-lily (Example App)

That's even worse >_< ugh...

Sorry >.<

I have no backstory for her

You could make one ^^ The back story is the most fun part about making a character in my opinion because it gives the OC definition and a reason to be who they are! I can give some examples if you'd like? :D

I have a backstory for her but not as unicorn

You could modify it a bit ^^ I'm sure it's not that much different :D